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                                                 Copyright –Claire Fuller
Now I understand writing is not an easy job. My God , I have to struggle so much to write even 100 meaningful words. My salute to all the writers.
Fiction
word count- 100

Conversation

‘ Hello Ms oldchurch !’
‘ Hello Mr Oldtree !’

‘  It is so lonely and eerie here’

‘  Now no one comes here in the evening .’

‘ May be people think this place is haunted.’

‘  What? I don’t understand why people are afraid of old things ?’

‘ Old things remind them of weakness and death.’

‘ Now we need them most and they have stopped coming to us.’

‘ We may be old, weak but we are still loving, caring, we longed for company.’

‘ Don’t be sad, we still have each other for company, what will happen if one of us goes?’

‘ Don’t  please don’t leave me alone, ever.’

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I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing thought, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

10 responses »

  1. So true. Nobody really has time for the old and needy.

    Well done. 🙂

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  2. oh wow well written Ma…lovely story

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  3. Dear Indira,

    You’ve written a poignant conversation between two unlikely characters.

    In your third to the last sentence “We may be old,…” it’s spelled weak not week. Weak is lack of strength while week is a portion of a calender. English-as-a-first-language speakers make this mistake all too often. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Dear Rochelle, thanks a lot for your meticulous observation and suggestion there of. Its a typo mistake and proof reader didn’t pointed it out. So nice of you. Thanks again.

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  4. I can easily imagine this conversation. The concept is great. Loved this!

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