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FRIDAY FICTIONEERS.– 100 words story challenge by rochellewisoff

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Solution

Grandmother was pushing the wheelchair , her five-year old grandson,  sitting on it ,  was enjoying the ride looking around  watching everything with keen interest. He was always full of questions.

‘Why these shopping carts are lying there in the water grandma?’ he inquired.

‘ Perhaps they are damaged dear’ she replied.
‘ They will rust in the water. Will they be  thrown away? ‘ he was worried.
‘ No dear,metals are either repaired or recycled.’
‘What is recycling?’
‘ They will be melted and made new.’

‘O grandma, why couldn’t doctors  get  both of us recycled’ , grandson chuckled mischievously, ‘you will become young and I’ll get my legs back.’

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  1. Wise words from the mouth of a five year old. May be in a century or so we shall learn to recycle the essence of individuals experience.

    This is very nicely crafted. 🙂

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  2. Dear Indira,

    So like a child to see a simple solution. A couple of things, You need a ‘ mark after ‘Will they be thrown away?…and they will be melted. Good characterization of the five year old boy. Bittersweet story and a different take on the prompt.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Dear Indira,

    A sweet story told well. Good job.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  4. A bitter sweet story – related in all innocence as only a child can

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  5. Indira, your dialogue sounds so real. Well done.

    jaent

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  6. oh Ma what a beauty..loved the story, and the last line is superb ♥

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