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Friday Fictioneers –”Salvation”

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copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

“Salvation”

Fiction- By Indira- 100 words

She was arrogant, rude, and never thought twice before humiliating servants in front of others.
No servant lasted with her except all-rounder Ramu, who swallowed his pride as she paid generously but now he was also exasperated with her and wanted to quit but not without teaching her a lesson.
So when she ordered him to repair her dear synthesizer, which also had to tolerate her singing in a hoarse voice.
Ramu saw his chance.
After completing his job he patted it apologetically.
He said – ” Goodby synthesizer, and sorry, but it is your salvation too” and left the house forever.

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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  1. Dear Indira,

    I am so happy after reading your perfect story. What a delight. I cannot wait to see the look on her face.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  2. Dear Indira,

    How kind of Ramu. A mercy killing for sure. Great story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Wah!

    That is a very neat take on the prompt. Loved it.

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  4. Great take on the prompt.

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  5. Good for Ramu! He made the right decision : )

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  6. That was a good one there…
    Love and respect for others should always come first in all we do.

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  7. The sweetness of revenge and the perfect payback.

    janet

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  8. What a wickedly good story, Indira. 😀

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  9. Very well crafted little tale, a lot in a little.

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  10. Love that servants and playthings can have their day in court… 🙂

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  11. Ha ha loved it! Good for Ramu, she so deserved it! 😀

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