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Friday Fictioneers –”Salvation”

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“Salvation”

Fiction- By Indira- 100 words

She was  arrogant, rude and never thought   twice before  humiliating servants in front of  others.
No servant lasted with her except  all rounder Ramu, who swallowed his pride as she paid generously  but now he was also exasperated with her and wanted to quit but not without teaching her a lesson.
So when she ordered him to repair her  dear synthesizer, which  also had to tolerate her singing in hoarse voice.
Ramu saw his chance.
After completing his job he patted it apologetically.
He said – ” Goodby synthesizer, and sorry, but it is your salvation too” and left the house forever.

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing thought, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

28 responses »

  1. Dear Indira,

    I am so happy after reading your perfect story. What a delight. I cannot wait to see the look on her face.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  2. Dear Indira,

    How kind of Ramu. A mercy killing for sure. Great story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Wah!

    That is a very neat take on the prompt. Loved it.

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  4. Great take on the prompt.

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  5. Good for Ramu! He made the right decision : )

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  6. That was a good one there…
    Love and respect for others should always come first in all we do.

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  7. The sweetness of revenge and the perfect payback.

    janet

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  8. What a wickedly good story, Indira.😀

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  9. Very well crafted little tale, a lot in a little.

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  10. Love that servants and playthings can have their day in court… 🙂

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  11. Ha ha loved it! Good for Ramu, she so deserved it!😀

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