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“Salvation”
Fiction- By Indira- 100 words
She was arrogant, rude, and never thought twice before humiliating servants in front of others.
No servant lasted with her except all-rounder Ramu, who swallowed his pride as she paid generously but now he was also exasperated with her and wanted to quit but not without teaching her a lesson.
So when she ordered him to repair her dear synthesizer, which also had to tolerate her singing in a hoarse voice.
Ramu saw his chance.
After completing his job he patted it apologetically.
He said – ” Goodby synthesizer, and sorry, but it is your salvation too” and left the house forever.
Dear Indira,
I am so happy after reading your perfect story. What a delight. I cannot wait to see the look on her face.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks you like it. She deserved it, no?
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Dear Indira,
How kind of Ramu. A mercy killing for sure. Great story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Shalom.
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Wah!
That is a very neat take on the prompt. Loved it.
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Thanks dear, your comment meant a lot to me.
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Always welcome 🙂
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Great take on the prompt.
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Thanks Sandra for your encouraging comment.
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Good for Ramu! He made the right decision : )
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Thanks for your visit and comment.
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That was a good one there…
Love and respect for others should always come first in all we do.
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Thanks and I respect your views.
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The sweetness of revenge and the perfect payback.
janet
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Thanks Janet for your beautiful comment.
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What a wickedly good story, Indira. 😀
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I liked your comment, thanks dear.
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Hmm, serves her right!
You have come such a long way, Indira!
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/10/23/friday-fictioneers-ff-102513-personal-music-pg13/
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Thanks a lot Scott, your comments are very encouraging.
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Very well crafted little tale, a lot in a little.
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thanks for your visit and lovely comment.
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Love that servants and playthings can have their day in court… 🙂
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Thanks. playthings will appreciate it very much.
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Ramu is a hero!
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He appreciates it, thanks.
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Y/W
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Ha ha loved it! Good for Ramu, she so deserved it! 😀
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Thanks Tracy, I am happy you enjoyed it.
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