Friday Fictioneers –”Salvation”

Posted on 25/10/2013 by Indira

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“Salvation”

Fiction- By Indira- 100 words

She was arrogant, rude, and never thought twice before humiliating servants in front of others.
No servant lasted with her except all-rounder Ramu, who swallowed his pride as she paid generously but now he was also exasperated with her and wanted to quit but not without teaching her a lesson.
So when she ordered him to repair her dear synthesizer, which also had to tolerate her singing in a hoarse voice.
Ramu saw his chance.
After completing his job he patted it apologetically.
He said – ” Goodby synthesizer, and sorry, but it is your salvation too” and left the house forever.

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I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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dmmacilroy | 25/10/2013 at 9:55 am

Dear Indira,

I am so happy after reading your perfect story. What a delight. I cannot wait to see the look on her face.

Aloha,

Doug

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 10:02 am
  
  Thanks you like it. She deserved it, no?
  
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rochellewisoff | 25/10/2013 at 9:56 am

Dear Indira,

How kind of Ramu. A mercy killing for sure. Great story.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 10:00 am
  
  Thanks Rochelle. Shalom.
  
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yarnspinnerr | 25/10/2013 at 10:01 am

Wah!

That is a very neat take on the prompt. Loved it.

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 10:05 am
  
  Thanks dear, your comment meant a lot to me.
  
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  - yarnspinnerr | 25/10/2013 at 10:41 am
    
    Always welcome 🙂
    
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Sandra | 25/10/2013 at 11:41 am

Great take on the prompt.

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 6:29 pm
  
  Thanks Sandra for your encouraging comment.
  
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mike olley | 25/10/2013 at 12:00 pm

Good for Ramu! He made the right decision : )

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 6:30 pm
  
  Thanks for your visit and comment.
  
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Charles Williams Aborishade | 25/10/2013 at 12:28 pm

That was a good one there…
Love and respect for others should always come first in all we do.

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 6:32 pm
  
  Thanks and I respect your views.
  
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sustainabilitea | 25/10/2013 at 2:36 pm

The sweetness of revenge and the perfect payback.

janet

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- Indira | 25/10/2013 at 6:33 pm
  
  Thanks Janet for your beautiful comment.
  
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adinparadise | 25/10/2013 at 8:20 pm

What a wickedly good story, Indira. 😀

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- Indira | 26/10/2013 at 11:58 am
  
  I liked your comment, thanks dear.
  
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kindredspirit23 | 26/10/2013 at 9:15 am

Hmm, serves her right!
You have come such a long way, Indira!
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/10/23/friday-fictioneers-ff-102513-personal-music-pg13/

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- Indira | 26/10/2013 at 11:52 am
  
  Thanks a lot Scott, your comments are very encouraging.
  
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anelephantcant | 27/10/2013 at 10:34 pm

Very well crafted little tale, a lot in a little.

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- Indira | 28/10/2013 at 7:36 am
  
  thanks for your visit and lovely comment.
  
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hugmamma | 28/10/2013 at 11:52 pm

Love that servants and playthings can have their day in court… 🙂

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- Indira | 29/10/2013 at 12:47 am
  
  Thanks. playthings will appreciate it very much.
  
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lingeringvisions by Dawn | 29/10/2013 at 12:21 am

Ramu is a hero!

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- Indira | 29/10/2013 at 12:46 am
  
  He appreciates it, thanks.
  
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  - lingeringvisions by Dawn | 29/10/2013 at 12:57 am
    
    Y/W
    
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theamateurcamera | 10/11/2013 at 6:00 pm

Ha ha loved it! Good for Ramu, she so deserved it! 😀

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- Indira | 11/11/2013 at 2:13 am
  
  Thanks Tracy, I am happy you enjoyed it.
  
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