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Five Sentence Fiction – Human

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What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.

The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.

This week: HUMAN

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Cheater

 The man lying on the pavement in tattered cloths was the same man, who, once lived like a king, was worshiped like god by his disciples, who foolishly believed in his magic tricks, smooth talks and false promises, hoped that with his super power he will help them get money, power and success without any hard work.

He took advantage of their laziness, greed and stupidity, made enough money, acquired enough power to think himself above law till one day, when he molested a minor girl, who was brought to him by her poor parents for some treatment, in the hope that he will cure her with some prayers.

He was caught as the girl and her parents complained to police, though he feigned innocence no one believed him this time and the same people who have put him on the high pedestal were after his blood, realizing the seriousness of the situation he absconded in tattered clothes to disguise himself, praying not to be recognized as he knew nothing is worse than mobs furry.

When he could run no more, hungry and tired he fell down and lost his consciousness, lying there he was getting sympathy from people who did not know his real identity but was he human, worthy of their pity?

Who was to be blamed, people who gave him the chance to cheat themselves   or the fake god man who took advantage of their greed and cheated them?

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing thought, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

17 responses »

  1. the person who has suffered only can realize and understand pains of others …… experience is in depth understanding of a problem…… most of the human greed for their value in others eye but forget to plant seed of own value within ….. value within is true value of a human being …… good post …..love all.

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  2. It is a powerful story.When a human gets away with all his evil desires,he forgets that there is a God above.,All his sins are taken into account.He will lose everything.,And will face the consequences of his deceit.
    Ranu

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  3. Tough questions that don’t have easy answers

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  4. A very profound story, Indira. So many different things must be taken into consideration, but it’s very sad,; no doubt about that.

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  5. the picture speaks for itself! Keen eye and great work🙂

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  6. Amazing and Thank you for writing which is quite good and best wishes always, and greetings. Kindness blossoms in your heart

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  7. Thats a powerful shot, the very best photograph you’v ever taken… well done🙂

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  8. Very deep, Indira. Enjoyable.
    Scott

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