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MOMENTS

Moments of love I cherish.

Moments of togetherness I relish.

Moments of gratitude I like to live again and again.

Moments of compassion I linger on.

Though moments of hatred  I try to forget,

 moments of failure, I try to forget not,

to learn from them and move on.

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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  1. Thank you so much, I truly enjoy your blog and hope many more stop in to read. Again Congratulations. Gede Prama 🙂

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  2. It appears this week you’ve truly described everyone’s basic life history in a mere five sentences; the GOOD and the BAD, and how we should deal with it. Beautifully done. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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    • Thanks a lot, you made my day with this beautiful comment. Have a nice Sunday.

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      • You’re quite welcomed. I merely wrote what I saw reading between the lines. Hopefully this week I’ll be able to get the creative juices flowing inside those little grey cells of my mind flowing again. Have a GREAT WEEK !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  3. very insightful and full of depth Indiraji. You spoke of the gist of life in the few moments !

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  4. Lovely Poem! Beautiful moments of life.

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  5. It,s a beautiful poem Indira.

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  6. Moments that captures our hearts.

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  7. Sorry to repeat what everyone else has said but it is so beautiful and meaningful because we can relate to your words. It’s amazing the deep emotion conveyed in so few words. x

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  8. A lot of wisdom packed into those beautiful five sentences.

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  9. Very nice! Most would be better off if they used this as a list of instructions on how to live.

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  10. Very beautiful – how’s your lovely daughter?
    Scott

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  11. A lovely interpretation of the concept: congratulations!

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  12. I’m back to thank for stopping by,Indira.

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