Five Sentence Fiction – Clutch
First Encounter
My six-year-old brother clutched my hand tightly and pleaded, ‘ Please stay at home with me, princess.” He was fourteen years younger than me, was born with Down’s syndrome, has the wisdom of a three-year-old child, and always wanted me to stay at home.
He was quite affectionate, loving, and caring. I always agreed to stay in spite of my boss getting angry with me; often, he even taunted me to leave the job and stay at home. I knew he was right, but I had no heart to say no to my brother.
I agreed, spent the day with him, took him for a walk in the evening, then told him a story at bedtime, and he slept.
After a few days, he met with an accident, and though it was just a mild push by his elder brother’s bicycle, he became restless. We rushed him to the hospital, where doctors said it was a brain hemorrhage, and he could not survive and had only 48 hours to live.
Sitting by his bedside, I watched him slowly succumb to his injury, second by second lights going out of his eyes, skin becoming dull every minute. The next day he was gone, without giving us time to do something for him. This was my first encounter with death, which is embedded in my mind till now.
Oh, this is so sad. He was only 6?
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Yes dear and so affectionate, so sweet.
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I thought it didn’t feel like fiction. You are a princess, obviously he saw the real you.
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That’s why I tagged it under non fiction. I’m no princess dear but for him yes perhaps hearing those stories of prince and princes….
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You had the heart of a princess.
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So sweet of you Brenda. Thanks.
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What a sad post. You gave your brother love he needed so badly. It will in the long run make you happy,I hope.
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I wanted to have this off my chest hence this post. He was very loving.
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A very moving account, Indira. I’m so sorry for your sad memory, but I’m sure you also have happy memories of your little brother.
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Thanks dear, now I only have lovely memories of him.
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Very sad, but more poignant as it’s your story. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for visit and comment dear.
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Very sad, but she was so very loving and has good memories to share.
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Thanks for your kind words.
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Oh my gosh. This is extremely sad. It’s so brave of you to share and I feel privileged to have read about how sweet your brother was. I hope you have loads of happy memories too. xx
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Thanks Lizzi, I have very sweet memories of him.
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