Five Sentence Fiction – Marriage
Marriage was never in her priority list as there was so much more to do; a bright future was looking ahead for her.
Then came a marriage proposal, which made her forget all about her future plans and she agreed to marry.
Post marriage her life was confined to just family, household chores, boring neighborhood parties and family functions.
She didn’t repent but wondered, could life be better than this, wasn’t she missing something.
What to do, she just followed the wise man who said ‘ marriage is that fruit which you repent if you eat but you repent more if you don’t eat.’
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And you said you couldn’t write…. enlightening. 🙂
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Thanks Amin. It took lot of time to write this one. Thanks to you , your advice motivated me. In fact I was scared to press publish button.
On Tue, Jun 3, 2014 at 3:01 AM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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Glad I helped 🙂
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The last sentence sums it up all.Very nicely put
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Thanks KP, very encouraging comment.
On Tue, Jun 3, 2014 at 6:17 AM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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Lovely use of our proverb. Excellent.
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Actually it is ‘ Dilli ka laddu’ I could not think of appropriate word. Thanks for reading.
On Tue, Jun 3, 2014 at 7:23 PM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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here in this part it is bhoore (unprocessed sugar) ka laddoo. 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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Thats a good write.
yeah that is the most common thought of every women whos gonna marry.
The wise man who quoted it is indeed wise 😉
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thanks Satya.
On Fri, Jun 6, 2014 at 4:01 PM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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Both of my marriages were a mess; however, the first one yielded me two glorious children, and the second, well that may not have yielded much…
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It happens when there is no understanding and commitment from both side. Thanks for sharing.
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