Five Sentence Fiction – Abandoned
She watched her body lying on the floor like an abandoned house, her organs, heart, kidney, liver, all flying out one by one. Last to leave was her soul, looking despairingly at her.
‘Why are you all leaving me like this?’ She whined.
‘You have never respected and cared for this body, you took it for granted, and you forgot that it is an abode of God, you abused and misused it, you became a slave to your mind, you never listened to your conscience, your overindulgence in food and laziness had made us live inside it impossible.’
She woke up with a start; perspiring profusely; thank God; it was a dream, effect of all that junk food she ate last night, perhaps.
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I love this! What a scary dream that would be!
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Thanks Amanda.
On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 5:05 PM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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Haha, this was quite a surprising tale. However, I refuse to think too much about dietary habits on a Friday evening. 😀
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Thanks Deboshree, once in a while it’s okay I think.
On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 5:35 PM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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That would definitely be a nightmare, made me stop and think about what my insides would say to me…scary thought!
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Scary indeed. Thanks for the visit.
On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 9:11 PM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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A tale made by nightmare and reflection of the soul. Quite a mind-blowing one:)
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Lol, we’ve all had that dream after overconsuming!
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Your LOL made my day. Thanks.
On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 5:03 AM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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Wonderful.I loved this.If only our organs were able to speak they would say the same thing even when awake.
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They KP but we don’t listen . Thanks for lovely comment.
On Sat, Jan 24, 2015 at 7:19 AM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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This is wonderful, I must start eating healthily
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ASAP dear. Thanks.
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This reminds me of an istory – 150 words or less. Love the clever twist at the end. Also love the overall look of your blog! I also write poetry and paint, etc…
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Thanks Janis, I’ll visit your blog.
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