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Friday Fiction-The Proud Owner

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Writing 101,Day 12-Play with word count

Friday fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff, PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

 

PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

word count-100

The Proud Owner

The proud owner of the house forgot that he has to leave it one day.

He took great pride in maintaining it with utmost care and love,  surrounded it with a beautiful garden.

He devoted all his time in beautifying its exterior, neglecting its interior and other aspects of life. He neglected maintaining good relationship with relatives, friends and neighbours.

When the time to departure came he repents,

‘One must always make balance in maintaining the interior and exterior of the house, one must plant seeds of good karma so the fragrance of flowers of good karma will remain forever.’

 

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing thought, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

13 responses »

  1. Some people sure get hooked into appearances. He repented, but did he learn his lesson??

    https://minick1943.wordpress.com/2015/09/22/writing-101-day-12-word-count/

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  2. Good story, Indira. Seems that was a lesson learned too late, and it’s something we should all keep in mind. Well written.🙂 — Suzanne

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  3. There’s a lesson I need to learn. Many thanks Indira.

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  4. Beautiful story. I love the final part. It’s eye-opening.🙂

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  5. These are very wise words, someting we should remember often. Beautiful story.

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