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Limerick Poetry Challenge- Fall

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Limerick Poetry Challenge

How poor apple was blamed and  forbidden

For the fall of Adam and Eve from the Eden

Whereas  apple a day

Keeps the illness away

And with loads of goodness it is laden

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When they ate the fruit which was forbidden
Adam and Eve had a fall from the heaven
They ran with full might
From the fruit of delight
For their faith in it was shaken

 

(This is my first attempt at Limericks, don’t know whether it is correct or not. I’ll appreciate comments on it.)

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I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing thought, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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  1. I really like your limerick…you have done a wonderful job with the prompt! 🙂

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  2. Fun Simplicity

    I love it! 🙂

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  3. It’s really beautiful with a lot of humor and meaning in just a few words.

    Thanks for sharing!

    Love and light ❤

    Anand 🙂

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