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Fallacy
‘Let’s check floor, walls and garden mom. They might have buried someone and now selling house for such a low price.
‘Don’t be a spoilsport. A perfect house in a wonderful locality, what more do you want?’Mother said.
I took a hammer and checked all the walls and floor for any open spots.
No skeleton? Mother laughed.
We arranged our luggage and settled in bed after a simple dinner.
In the morning mother dragged me out of bed ‘there are two skeletons in the house.’
Where? I jumped up.
‘In our bodies.
Hah!😁
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Hi Sandra dear, Your laugh makes me laugh,thanks.
On Mon, Feb 1, 2016 at 10:51 AM, Indira's Blog wrote:
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mother knows best. thanks for the laugh. 🙂
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Thanks dear. I’m glad it made you laugh.
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brilliant!
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Thanks dear.
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Dear Indira,
Very clever mother there. I enjoyed this story very much.
Just a minor crit which you may take or leave. I would’ve left out “Mother was laughing…” “In our bodies.” is a great punch line. But that could just be my preference in writing.
A good story nonetheless. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot Rochelle. You are such a great help. I have edited it. Thanks again.
Shalom, Indira.
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Great take and elegantly simple.
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Thanks YS.
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This had me smiling. Thank you. Mike
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Thanks Mike. I wanted to make everyone smile.
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Mother’s got a great sense of humor. Enjoyable story, Indira. Well done. 😀 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzzane.
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