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Fallacy

‘Let’s check floor, walls and garden mom. They might have buried someone and now selling house for such a low price.

‘Don’t be a spoil sport. A perfect house in a wonderful locality, what more do you want?’Mother said.

Not satisfied I took a hammer and checked all the walls and floor for any loose spot.

No skeleton? Mother laughed.

We arranged our luggage and settled in bed after simple dinner.

In the morning mother dragged me out of the bed ‘there are two skeletons in the house.’

Where? I jumped up.

‘In our bodies’.

 

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  1. mother knows best. thanks for the laugh. 🙂

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  2. Dear Indira,

    Very clever mother there. I enjoyed this story very much.

    Just a minor crit which you may take or leave. I would’ve left out “Mother was laughing…” “In our bodies.” is a great punch line. But that could just be my preference in writing.

    A good story nonetheless. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Great take and elegantly simple.

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  4. This had me smiling. Thank you. Mike

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  5. Mother’s got a great sense of humor. Enjoyable story, Indira. Well done. 😀 — Suzanne

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