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Friday Fictioneers- Unforgettable Bath

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Thanks Rochelle for the story challenge and the photo Prompt

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Fiction

100words

Unforgettable Bath

He should have gone home straight after completing his job, as was arranged.

But, he decided to look around, envying the way these super rich lived.

What attracted him most was a, magnificent bathroom fitted with facilities beyond his imagination.

A well stocked bar! This was irresistible.

What he needed, he assured himself, was a luxurious bath and a good stiff drink. Bottle in one hand he immersed himself in the bathtub filled with lukewarm water and fragrant salts, and switched on the music.

Slowly he drifted into a heavenly sleep.

Morning found the poor fellow surrounded by the policemen.

 

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

15 responses »

  1. Ha ha ha well done Ma ..never mix work and pleasure 😉

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  2. A nice humorous take on this prompt. Kudos.

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  3. Dear Indira,

    He reminds me a little of Goldilocks and the three bears. 😉 Clever one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    PS Your link doesn’t work. You might want to try again and I’ll delete the one that doesn’t work. 😉 Then more FF’rs can enjoy your story, too.

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  4. And that’s why you never get involved with rich people’s things if you’re a burglar without focus: You can get caught. Well done, Indira!

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  5. That’s a cheerful story – provided you’re not the poor fellow who’s been caught! Well done, Indira.

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  6. poor thing! it happened to a thief in Kolkata, that poor thing crept into someone’s home emptied their closets and fridge- and then fell asleep on their sofaset!

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