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Friday Fictioneer- Better Deal

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https://rochellewisoff.com– click here for a wonderful story by Rochelle Wisoff

Photo credit- Kelvin M Knight

100 words

Fiction

Better Deal

“Why me, didn’t I deserve a better deal’, I always whined, whenever I thought life is depriving me.

Parents and siblings always tried to show me the brighter side of everything with, ‘God loves you more.’

Today my slice of bread was not whole so’ less butter’ it meant.

I moaned.

Mother laughed, ‘it’s not my fault, and you were late so you get what is left.

Father intervened, ‘ it has a heart in it. What a lucky girl! , the mother has given you her heart.’

Siblings pounced on it.

Now we all had a piece of mother’s heart.

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

14 responses »

  1. beautiful read….. we all have a piece of mothers heart…… beautiful…..

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  2. Dear Indira,

    It’s always good to have someone who can point out the positives. Lovely story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. You are right dear. 🙂 thanks a lot.

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  4. Lovely story, Indira. The last line beautifully sums up our relationship with our mothers. 🙂

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  5. LOL…great story. I love how you showed both sides.

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