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Reena’s Exploration Challenge #73

PROMPT

The theme for this week is- ONE MINUTE

sandcastle
you make
with love and care
it takes 
few seconds 
for a wave
to 
wash it away
you laugh
you shrug
move on to make next
knowing fully well
that
waves will wash it away too
still
it doesn’t deter you
as the fun and
enjoyment of the moment
is bigger than the 
sorrow
it brings
when you accept 
and 
play along with it
~ indira

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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  1. The last 3 lines add so much of perspective and depth to the piece.

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  2. Very nicely written. Beauty lies in the journey and not the destination is so well pictured in the sand castle and waves analogy.

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  3. Wonderful:) In Germany we say: “Der Weg ist das Ziel.”, which means something like: “The journey is the aim.” I think it fits the deeper sense of your poem very well.

    A lovely day and all the best
    Laureen

    P. S.: Thank you for following:)

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  4. Wow

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