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Reena’s Exploration Challenge #89

Reena’s Exploration Challenge #89

sad, depressed, heart-broken

wandering along the seashore

calm, cool, soothing water

invites

I take a dip in the sea

water  tastes like my tears

waves  caress, wash traces of tears

whisper in my ear ‘don’t break down or bow out

be like us

carefree and courageous’

I surrender-

Floating with the waves

Time stands still to watch

Winds sing lullaby

About Indira

I knew all along that life is about, love, compassion, compatibility and friendship, but now I have discovered that life is also about sharing the thoughts, encouraging others and getting encouraged. So here I am with my blogs about life, friendship, love, and whatever life has taught me.

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  1. That’s excellently done.

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  2. I like the irony in this –

    water tastes like my tears

    waves caress, wash traces of tears

    salinity washing off salt.

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  3. Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Indira’s contribution to Exploration Challenge #89

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  4. Beautiful poem!

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