Crimson’s Creative Challenge #73
Mysterious metal box
Hidden in the dell
Surrounded by the shrubs
Arouses curiosity
Greed to find a treasure coax
But what if someone played a hoax
Crimson’s Creative Challenge #73
Mysterious metal box
Hidden in the dell
Surrounded by the shrubs
Arouses curiosity
Greed to find a treasure coax
But what if someone played a hoax
An onion has many layers. So have I!
with no commitments and all excuses
poet Poem poetry
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frightfully wondrous things happen here.
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Misérias,guerras,doenças, desempregos,não vem de Deus e nem dos Orixás. Vem do julgamento e desrespeito entre a humanidade
"Once a pond a time..."
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An onion has many layers. So have I!
with no commitments and all excuses
poet Poem poetry
Independent Publisher of Poetry and Prose
frightfully wondrous things happen here.
Practical advice for a happier, fuller, and more meaningful life
Ego stroking and addiction horror stories
Misérias,guerras,doenças, desempregos,não vem de Deus e nem dos Orixás. Vem do julgamento e desrespeito entre a humanidade
"Once a pond a time..."
A look at life, achieving good physical and mental health and happiness
Where creativity meets passion!
Inspiration and Spirituality **Award Free**
An onion has many layers. So have I!
with no commitments and all excuses
poet Poem poetry
Independent Publisher of Poetry and Prose
frightfully wondrous things happen here.
Good scan on those last two lines. Like it. 🙂
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Thanks, dear for the encouraging comment. I need a lot of it for writing even 4,5 lines. 🙂
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Your writing is good, and welcomed, never doubt it
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So nice of you to say that. So from getting just passing marks in English I have come a long way in 8 years of my blogging. Recently I downloaded Grammerlyapp. Still I have doubts sometimes.
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I take it English is not your first language? And if that”s the case, you’re doing more than just fine.
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Hindi is my first language . Thanks a lot.
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I think you’ve told me that before; sorry I’d forgotten. Well, you do a lot better than I’d do in any other language 🙂
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🙂
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This would go well with my story. What if there wasn’t anything in his box. The old man played a hoax so his family would never sell his farm.
Next question: How would that affect the one who finally bought the farm?
Just thinking out loud, One never know where it will lead.
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I would love to read it.
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I’ll think on it.
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