Rochelle Wisoff-Field
Fleeting Moment.
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They were coming back from a week-long holiday, which he could not enjoy due to work pressure back at the office. But to please her he had to go.
She complained,
‘Why you are always in a hurry? Why don’t you enjoy the ride?’
He retorted We have enjoyed enough’
‘Hey! just stop, I have to take a photograph’
‘No way, I have to attend an important meeting ‘
‘I have to reach there faaaaaaaaaaaaast—————-
‘I wish you had listened to me. Now we have nowhere to go and no one to meet.’
Sharing Thoughts 
Dear Indira,
I’m happy you decided to participate this week. Thanks again for allowing us to use your photos.
Your dialogue was as fast paced as the prompt. However, I’ll admit to getting a little lost in the conversation as to who was saying what.
I encourage you to link your story into the list for more reads.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle for taking time out and comment. I agree with you. Actually due to55 words limitation I was unable to write it. Well, thanks I hope will do better next time.
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In Friday Fictioneers the limitation is 100 words,so you’re allowed 45 more. 😉
As you can see, your photo has inspired a wide variety of stories.
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Thanks Rochelle, I under the wrong impression that it is 55 words. I overlooked perhaps.
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Interesting. The photo is fascinating. Maybe we can here the real story behind how that was taken 🙂
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Thanks dear, it was shot when moving in a fast driving car with my cell phone camera.
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loved it , and its scary the number of rash drivers on the road, every one is in so much hurry, they don’t mind risking theirs and others lives in this race to reach the destination
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Thanks Soma.
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Great effort, Indira. Glad you participated. I couldn’t find the link to log in. Mine is here – http://awaywithwordsblog.com/2013/06/28/friday-fiction-nowhere-to-go/
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Thanks for the encouragement dear.
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Nowhere to go and no one to meet – if that is what I think that is – they are lucky, in a sense.
Keep at it Indira, and you will get better with every new flash fiction.
Cheers,
Eric
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Thanks Eric, that’s a very encouraging comment.
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Welcome, that’s a good start, and a great photo for us this week. Well done on both counts.
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Thanks Sandra.
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Hello, Indira!
Thanks for your photo. It inspired a lot of stories! Tale a look at them and you’ll see how a lot of us did it in 100 words. I’m looking forward to your unique perspectives, too! If you’d like help, Rochelle is GREAT at feedback and you can enlist my help and many others should you need it.
Welcome!
Kent
(wmqcolby.wordpress)
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Thanks, I need all the help I can get. Looking forward for it.
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Hello Kent, thanks for your suggestion. I am unable to connect to your blog, may be due to internet problem, will try later. You all are so encouraging, thanks again.
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A meeting may take place – but not as planned! 🙂
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Yes dear, we plan and our destiny laughs.
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Indira, thanks for your second photo and for participating with a story this week. Hope you’re enjoying being part of the Fictioneers group.
janet
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Yes dear, but I think I should stick to photographs only.
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Dear indira,
Thank you for the marvelous picture and welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks Doug.
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Wonderful photo for us this week – thank you! And I loved your offering – we are always rushing…
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Thanks.
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welcome! and thank you for the awesome photo and yes, i enjoyed reading your story. sounds like a real conversation between me and my boyfriend.lol ^^
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Thanks Kz and yes it could be between any couple.
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Thanks, Indira. I am so glad you joined us. Yes, I understood and enjoyed the story.
Scott
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Thanks Scott. After reading your wonderful stories I am encouraged. I have a long way to go, thanks for encouraging me.
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