http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2013/08/21/23-august-2013/
Copyright –Claire Fuller
Fiction
word count- 100
Conversation
‘ Hello Ms oldchurch !’
‘ Hello Mr Oldtree !’
‘ It is so lonely and eerie here’
‘ Now no one comes here in the evening .’
‘Maybe people think this place is haunted.’
‘ What? I don’t understand why people are afraid of old things ?’
‘ Old things remind them of weakness and death.’
‘ Now we need them most and they have stopped coming to us.’
‘ We may be old, but we are still loving, and caring, we longed for company.’
‘ Don’t be sad, we still have each other for company, what will happen if one of us goes?’
‘ Don’t please don’t leave me alone, ever.’
‘
Sharing Thoughts 
So true. Nobody really has time for the old and needy.
Well done. 🙂
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Thanks, is it really okay.
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oh wow well written Ma…lovely story
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Thanks Soma, love and hugs.
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Dear Indira,
You’ve written a poignant conversation between two unlikely characters.
In your third to the last sentence “We may be old,…” it’s spelled weak not week. Weak is lack of strength while week is a portion of a calender. English-as-a-first-language speakers make this mistake all too often. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle, thanks a lot for your meticulous observation and suggestion there of. Its a typo mistake and proof reader didn’t pointed it out. So nice of you. Thanks again.
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This says a lot!
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Thanks Naomi.
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I can easily imagine this conversation. The concept is great. Loved this!
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Thanks, coming from you its a great comment, very encouraging.
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